10 min. # 5

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Character

The actors/actresses role in Once Upon a Time was to play one character with three separate ports from three separate worlds.  The three separate worlds were the fairytale world of Snow White and the seven dwarfs, the real world where they had no idea who they were because of a curse, and the real word after the curse was lifted.  Here is the list of the actors/actresses as well as the parts they played. Snow White as Mary Margaret (Ginnifer Goodwin), Prince Charming as David (Josh Dallas), the daughter of Snow and Charming as Emma (Jennifer Morrison), the grandson of Snow and Charming as Henry (Jared Gilmore), the evil queen as Regina (Lana Parrilla), Rumplestiltskin as Mr. Gold (Robert Carlyle). Now that you have a general idea of the characters in this movie let’s take a look at the settings.     

RR # 4

I thought Scott’s review was hard to follow at time because some of the words he used. When I read who he wrote the review for the big words made more sense to me. I liked the way that he compared his movies to the other James bond movies. He talked about how the main correctors have changed throughout the years. He compares the way they dressed, the way they are with woman, and how the new ones seem to have more emotion then the older bonds. He also compares the bond movies to other movies with a hero them. HE says that it seems to always be based on revenge of some sort. It was hard for me to get a visual of this movie the way it seemed like he skips around. I sis not think that he covered the title of the movie very well either, but he says the movie did not go with the title that he could tell of. He also does a good job with comparing the actors with other movies that they have done. He states that the main girl in the new bound movie Camille played by Olga Kurylenko is a typecast actor who plays the same kind of role in her other movies. He also gives a very brief insight on the music in this movie, but not too much insight. He just states that it was a good song on paper and then covers who sang the song for the movie.  I thought he could of giving more comparisons using other critics’ reviews. He could have gone over more of what the movie initialed and less on how it stood op to other types of heroic movies.

10 min. # 4

The hall was silent untill she heared a nock on the celing above her. she brushes it off and keeps walking down the hall to her room. befor she can get to the door she hears the nock again. THis time there is no deniing that she hearded something. It was now time for her to investagate what the noise was. Scaried and nervuse she starts to walke towardes the atic intreance of the home. this was down the hall from her room inside a storage closet. before she even makes to the storage room door she hears the nock again. slowly she reaches for the door and turnes the nob to open it. there hanging from the seling was a pice of rope that was used to pull the atic door down. As she pulled a set of stairs slinder and long came down. it was dark up in the atic and she could smell and feel the cold coming from it. she stops to think about what she is about to do every scarry movie running through her head. She desides to find some kind of light to take with her she tells her self its just on 10 min in class with the object we brought in. Remove content | Delete | Spam

Tina Weaver

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Tina Weaver September 21, 2012 10:12 AM

I really liked the way  that ALI HEINEKAMP was able to summarize the whole movie. Ali was able to tell me enough about the story that without even seeing, it I was able to get what the whole movie was about. Ali was still able to leave me wanting to know more about the movie. I wanted to try seeing things though her eyes. To see if I could find something that she might off missed. I also wanted to compare her opinion to the other critics that she put in her evaluation. I liked the way she gave accounts to the good and bad in this movie. I was able to differ if I though the way she did, if I thought it should be considered bad our considered good. I thought that t Ali did a good job by putting g in some of the commentary that she did. Some of the things that I thought off while reading her summery was that I doubt if I would let my 10 year old son watch this movie. I would however, let my 19 year old daughter watch the movie. I could also vision Juno in my head the type of person she was and, almost to an extent see her visually. I knew one thing for sure see was very sarcastic in the way she talked to people. I agreed with Alli when she said that she showed how child-like  by the way she talked. I want to see the movie so that I can see I f I see any emotion in Juno when she gives her baby away. I also want to see more about he r baby daddy as well.

10 MIN # 3

I liked it because they always had a positive attitude about the future up until the end. It was funny how they never got what they wanted out of the future all but Barney. It made me look at my future and past to see how far off I was compared to where I wanted to be at this time. I thought it was really easy to follow along even with all the time change. The comedy was real good as well it kept me laughing threw the whole show. The ending was really good as well because it was happy. In my life I try to stay positive about thing and it was good to see other people do the same. The funniest part to me was Barney's comments about, the boobs on the front and bake, and not wanting sloppy second even if their hiss. I can just imagine latter in the future that becoming the next trend. Which would have every woman in the world wanting four boobs? The ending also surprised me, the way they showed them in the future complaining about Ted bringing a woman with him to watch Star Wars. The writers wanted you to thank of a grown woman walking in the room. Then they through a curve ball at you when they have him walk out with a baby. I have only seen this show a couple of time, but after today I think that I will watch it more often. Over all it was a really good show and I think my old man would really like Barney. 

Post # 6

Well I will be so glade to turn in this narrative paper it took me forever to get done. Thank you to the people that read my essay in class. I went over everything that you said and it helps out a lot. Hope I was able to help you as well. I know as far as the grammar and spelling thing goes I was not able to help very much (sorry). Now we can all just wait to see what Professor Piro thought about them. I hope that she likes it over all and is not too hard on me. Don’t know if I'm ready for the next one yet, but I know it’s coming. I hope it goes better than this one did. Still having trouble getting my home life and school life figured out. It's a lot harder than I thought it would be. I just keep telling myself that it will be ok that all I can do is try. I think that I'm so afraid of failing I have so many people counting on me. Sometimes I wish that I had a magic noise like Samantha off of bewitched. I would not have to do all this stuff I could just twitch my noise and, diner would be done, my homework would be done, and the house would be clean. That is not going to happen anywhere but in my dreams. So it looks like it's going to be along 5 years for me. Well good luck with finishing the essay and see you in class on Thursday.

Post # 5

Hello everyone, hope your weekend was good, but mine sucked badly. I had a roof to do this weekend and for anyone who has not ever worked on a roof it is hard work. I t was supposed to be done yesterday but we didn't get it all finished. So now I have to go after school today and tomorrow to get it done. We were able to get most of the roof shingled and the cleanup is done as well. We still have the garage to tear off felt then single. WE also have to finish with the capping and but up the gutters then get everything coked. So needless to say my ... is so sore that I can hardly move today and my book bag feels heaver the ever. Thank God that I only have one class today. Will I think that I have my 3rd draft done and ready, but I guess I will see when you guys read it on Tuesday? Kind of looking forward to reading what someone else has written. So I can see how they wrote and the format they used just to compare. I am nerves about Professor Piro reading it though just don’t want to hear that I have a lot wrong because I worked real hard on the it. It took me all week to get it done and I'm so slow when it comes to typing that it takes me forever to do. When I get done it looks like crap because I just type and sometimes I don’t hit the correct keys. When I do spell check my whole paper is highlighted it is really bad. But I believe that I'm getting faster at it now I just need to make sure that I hit the right key.  

Well that is all for now see you guys in class.

post # 4

Well I just got done with my meeting with Mrs. Piro. She probably needed three or four more hours to go over my paper. I think I'm going to take it to my tutor and let him go over it. Still having trouble with the typing it's taking me too long. So with it being due on Thursday I better start now. It also don't help that I don't have a computer at home. Which means I have to do my work all at the learning center. I can't wait till I get what money is coming to me in October so I can get a computer. My son can't wait either he thinks he will be on it all the time. Oh, does he have another thing coming. I did tell him that he could get on it as long as I did not have work to do. I'm hoping with me having a computer at home will allow me to get more practice on it. Not to mention the fact that I can bet home with my family a little more. It's been really hard on my sun not having me there when he gets home. He told me the other day that he wanted to watch a movie with me this weekend if I had time. So I know that he truly misses are alone time together. I told him that I would do my best then reassure him that this will all be worth it in the end. Not only will we be better off financially but after school is done all I have to do is go to work. Then I told him more money means more toys and games. He liked that idea of that and said that he understood.

post # 3

Well it is September 11 and it was a long weekend for me. I had to take my mother to North Carolina to handle some of her personal stuff there. I has to miss one of my EET classes and I'm so afraid that I got behind. We was going to start are first lab work in class so all I could do was read over what I was supposed to do in class. I want to stay ahead in all my classes so this is really stressing me out. I know there is not much that I can do about it but it just sucks. Today is one of my long days so i have no time to go over and see what I can do to catch up. I'm hoping that I don't get to much more homework today so I can spend all day tomorrow making up for the time I missed. So for I only have to redo my draft for my English class and read a few chapters. Professor Piro told us to just work on the draft but I looked at are syllabus and it says to read chapter 24, 25, and 27 in are books. SO I think that I will try to do that as well. Like I said I still have three more classes to go so I'm keeping my fingers crossed. This is way more then I thought it was going to be but I'm going to keep my head up Its either do are die. So I think that is all for now hope everyone has a good week. Good luck on the meeting Thursday as well hope she likes your story and you don't have to redo to much off it.

10 min. # 2

I brought my Scholarship binder to class for the object that we need to bring. It's Blake and so for not very thick. It feels really smooth to the touch. It has a leathery smell to me like a new leather jacket or something. It has 9 plastic sleeves inside of it for whatever you want to put in it. So far I have four out of the nine sleeves field up. The first sleeve has my special recognition certificate from the ABLE/GED program in it. Behind that is the speech I gave at the ceremony. The second sleeve has my GED Memorial Book Scholarship in it with the essay I wrote for that one behind it. The third sleeve has my STEM Scholarship with the essay I wrote for that one behind it. The fourth sleeve has my Lima Rotary Scholarship application in it. This is the only Scholarship that I applied for that I did not win. I keep these because it reminds me that if I work hard at this writing thing I'm only going to get better. I know that I am not the best writer ion the world our even the best writer in my class. I know that if I could write two essays that were good enough to when Scholarships. There is no limit to the things that I might be able to achieve with this writing stuff. You never know maybe I will begin to love writing and one day put out a best seller. 

RR#2 Alison Bechdel

What I got from the story was that she felt that her whole family was living separate and some secrets lives. She blamed a lot of it on the fact that they lived away from the rest of the world. Even after the fact that they stated to be connected by roads and just the growth in society. She talked about her father having to be someone that he wasn't that he was kind of playing a role as a father and husband. That deep down inside he was torn about his sexuality. That being one of the main reasons for him ending his own life as well as the fact that he felt a lone. I loved the way she compared the dream she had of the sun setting before her father could see it to a sign of his upcoming passing. The pictures gave me great detail into what her life most of been like. How her family was always busy doing their own things. How it had made them all independent but at the same time also made them more isolated. When her mother was working on the play and they over heard her father’s voice she talked about how it was the same way in life both of them living only just to bass by. I could almost put myself into her shoes feeling what her and her mother both might of felt. The feeling of sadness because he was no longer there. I think that she focused a lot on the fact that her town was cut off of the rest of the world because she believed that if her father could of somehow got away he might still be alive.  Over all I thought it was a good story and I could see myself almost living her life as she did.   

10 min.

Yes I am afraid of writing for one I am so bad at this typing ting and i can not spell verey well. I'm working on the spellling thing the best I can by writing my homework out.  I freez up to I cant think of what I want to say and how I want to say it. then I start to think avbout how people are going to jugde my writing and ai tthey will even be abble to read it. I am going to over come all of my fears because I want to do better in life I want to be able to spell what ever I want . I would also love to get faster at the typing thing as well. through hard work and alot a practis I am going to get better at this like I said I refuse to goive up I refuse to say I can't. talking about this literacy narrative that we have to do I think I will probily have to writi it aover and over again but if that is what it takes that is what i will do. I want to tell the story of my life and how for I have caome aI know by the looks of it I have a vrery long way to go. thats why I want to talk about some of the things that got me where iI am today,. I wored realy hard to get my GED I thought I was just going to get it and then be able to get a bretter job. As I started to work in all the areas that I needee to work on such as English, Mathe and all of the above. It was going to take awile but I would get oit done.