Burnett opens up by giving information about his self in third person. He does this to so that he has some experience when it comes to the issue at hand, basically making him creatable. Then he goes over exactly what the problem is as well as why is not getting fixed, giving us the background information that is needed. Then he starts to give evidence to back up what he is saying. He does this by researching how much money was earned and how much money was lost for each program. He also gives reason for why the growth or decline is happing. Then he starts to bring together his proposal by saying with this information congress could do a demonstration program. Then he goes over exactly how to implement the plan (how to carry it out). Then he tells what the outcome should be after the plan. Then he restates how he knows this plane will work. He ends with saying that we as the taxpayer should be grateful. This is his way of calling us to action. Being grateful for something means we got something out of it, so if we can get lower taxes with this plan why not stand up and fight for it. I thought he did a great job was much shorter than the Hopkins one that I just followed, but that is ok. I ended up with six pages without even counting the works cited page, so I have a lot to take out and rethink. Well at the mark and one more to go YES!
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